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Post by thatenglishdude on Jun 15, 2009 17:04:20 GMT -5
Hey that looks great. I've always been envious of those who can draw. Me, I'm a dab hand at computer artistics etc but actual pen and paper, I'm useless.
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shouhei
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Post by shouhei on Jun 15, 2009 19:03:11 GMT -5
Thanks! Haha, my friend was helping me on this a little bit.. telling me if I should shade/highlight something. :3 I love drawing on paper and on the computer! Anyways, this is an updated version of the pic-- -Shou~
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jeroz
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Post by jeroz on Jun 15, 2009 20:05:34 GMT -5
i really like the shading of the skin. the position of the sternum (actually it's the manubrium~) is a bit off to the right, but that can be fixed by making the person lifts up the right shoulder and looked to the right. the hair has the potential to get messy so be careful with that. lower curvature of the lower lip looked to be a bit too low, potentially making the lower lip look fat~
Overall satisfied with the pic so far, just some tiny details that i think you could work on.
P.S. Is there a way to quote a big picture but minimise it in the quotation so it doesn't take up much space?
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shouhei
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Post by shouhei on Jun 16, 2009 21:35:16 GMT -5
Thanks-- I worked hard on it. x__x; Uh, I wouldn't know about that, LOL. I just draw what I think looks right. Yeah. I completely destroyed it. LOL. Eh, I like it. I think it's cute. :3 Yeah, I have little/lots of things to work on-- this is just something that I could maybe use for my art portfolio next year. :] I have no idea. LOL. But here's what I got so far. Like I said, I destroyed it. I tried using a tutorial. I'm horrible at following tutorials, lol.. -Shou~
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jeroz
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Post by jeroz on Jun 17, 2009 20:10:49 GMT -5
ok, first of all, try to work on your outline, the edge on the right hand side of the neck just looks unnatural. the lighting on the hair is a bit murky, it's a bit too obvious for th general tone, and i think you applied it to areas that aren't suppose to reflect light (e.g. bottom right corner). and what's with that block of non reflection in the middle? it's just looks too unnatural for me XD lastly, i am guessing the light shines directly onto the face, so there shouldn't be such a big reflection from the back of the head.
There are just a few things to fix up, but i think maybe you should start the white bit again with less opacity
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Post by loginnameperson on Jun 19, 2009 20:21:33 GMT -5
A wallpaper I personally did, but I thought some people might actually like it. K-on. :3 2nd version:
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bakedgoods17
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Post by bakedgoods17 on Jun 20, 2009 23:11:42 GMT -5
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ZombiNe
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Post by ZombiNe on Jun 21, 2009 1:19:03 GMT -5
Oh god. I haven't posted here in a while. Well I was watching Brad play House of The Dead: Overkill today, and I saw that his in-game name was, "Bradasss" so that lead me to drawing this. Enjoy. HE IS BRADASS!
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Post by xxblueshadowxx on Jun 21, 2009 19:56:31 GMT -5
OMG that is awesome zombine(everything you make is usually awesome ) i bet brad will like that. maybe you should give him a shotgun or 2 pistols.
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Post by str4ngerd4nger on Jun 21, 2009 20:18:41 GMT -5
or a shotgun in one hand, a hot girl in the other
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Post by AznSenzation on Jun 21, 2009 20:37:20 GMT -5
or a shotgun in one hand, a hot girl in the other how bout just 1 girl in each hand?
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lux138
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Post by lux138 on Jun 21, 2009 23:59:44 GMT -5
or a shotgun in one hand, a hot girl in the other how bout just 1 girl in each hand? How about a bear corpse in his left hand and Bayonetta on his right?
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shouhei
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Post by shouhei on Jun 22, 2009 18:01:34 GMT -5
Nah. I'll go with the 2 girls in each hand.
-Shou~
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Post by Buddhachriz on Jun 22, 2009 22:39:29 GMT -5
this thread never gets old.
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Post by flip on Jun 23, 2009 4:06:34 GMT -5
Some creature, I named it birdie. I was really just messing around with water color pencils at first. Turned out real well in the end. Here's some more of my work if anyone is interested. flycop.deviantart.com/
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